tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24806308.post116144665745230184..comments2023-10-08T07:04:49.054-07:00Comments on The Writing Life: Polished Rocks, Part Onekariohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10150537989886423212noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24806308.post-1161663176018516452006-10-23T21:12:00.000-07:002006-10-23T21:12:00.000-07:00Bring on the next section, can't wait to see where...Bring on the next section, can't wait to see where this is going.Carrie Wilson Linkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01586157395539583862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24806308.post-1161610112649643012006-10-23T06:28:00.000-07:002006-10-23T06:28:00.000-07:00No question, you can write Kari. With this piece,...No question, you can write Kari. <BR/><BR/>With this piece, I feel I need a hook? Perhaps it's coming in the next paragraph...but I need a little foreshadowing or something that hints to me that this is not just about two families on vacation or chipped nail polish. Something to pull me in further and make me want to find out what the story is? Give me a little glint.<BR/><BR/> ; )Michelle O'Neilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03221354521123541601noreply@blogger.com